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現在重看,心理描寫未夠好,畢...太感動了,你果然是個坐言起行的男人,仲睇哂十篇,逐一留言,太感動了。<br /><br />現在重看,心理描寫未夠好,畢竟2007年囉,如果我現在重貼,好似過時,脫了節。<br /><br />祝你2013年多寫好文!卡臣https://www.blogger.com/profile/07721247414470395559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-24843884223567082172012-12-31T01:45:36.586+08:002012-12-31T01:45:36.586+08:00卡臣兄,
經過上次對話後,小弟再次拜讀你的大作「兩花生」,看得津津有味。我廢事逐篇留言喇,我嘗試睇...卡臣兄,<br /><br />經過上次對話後,小弟再次拜讀你的大作「兩花生」,看得津津有味。我廢事逐篇留言喇,我嘗試睇一篇,自己mark低一段留言,之後先繼續睇下一篇,最後一次過留晒畀你喇 :)<br /><br />兩花生–01 - 東京二小姐<br /><br />Calvin所說的〝獨自打壁球比喻〞很好,小弟現在感同身受。<br /><br /><br />兩花生–02 - 尾班火車<br /><br />Calvin最初諗得太多喇,如果喺Mr. Doughnut店度咀咗落去,我諗一定嚇怕Kathy呀,到時真係賴晒嘢,形象破產喇。<br /><br /><br />兩花生–03 - 觸摸淺草寺 <br /><br />睇嚟Calvin真係好鍾意幻想喎。<br /><br />〝Kathy突然把右手挽在Calvin的左手手臂上〞,女追男,隔層紗呀。如果個女仔質素唔差嘅話,簡單一出呢招真係殺晒D宅男呀。<br /><br /><br />兩花生–04 - 不能說的願望<br /><br />〝Calvin吃這杯雪糕的背後象徵意義是:正式掀起「背着女朋友造反」的序幕〞,寫得好到位。通常心裡反抗另一半嘅時候,都會做出一D平時對方唔畀做嘅嘢。<br /><br /><br />兩花生–05 - 祝你愉快<br /><br />呢篇比之前幾篇更加寫出咗Calvin嘅無奈同埋相逢恨晚。但係Calvin最後嗰嘢「十指緊扣」好似太進取喎。<br /><br /><br />兩花生–06 - 生日禮物<br /><br />Calvin拖完先好諗藉口開脫,好易賴嘢喎。影貼紙相呢家嘢,唔知而家仲有冇嘅呢?<br /><br /><br />兩花生–07 - 霓虹秋葉原<br /><br />Calvin用Plan B之餘仲要用埋「假傳聖旨」呢招,過份d喎。最衰之前睇咗個結局,如果唔係我一定會以為係激戰連場呀 :p<br /><br /><br />兩花生–08 - 1412號房<br /><br />〝如果你知道有啲嘢而家唔做,日後一定會後悔嘅話,咁你就立即去做啦!〞,呢一句說話,係講畀d冇包袱嘅人聽o嘅啫。<br /><br /><br />兩花生–09 - 迷失中野<br /><br />又電話响,有冇咁啱咁橋呀!<br /><br />〝Kathy心知道「立即推開他」未必會是她的即時反應!〞,令我諗起一句〝口裡說不,身體卻很誠實〞 :p<br /><br /><br />兩花生 - 10 - 我是兩個<br /><br />〝原來玩surprise也需要一點默契和運氣〞,小弟亦感同身受,因為又賴過嘢 :o<br /><br />〝對不起!我在淺草寺馬路前,作故事騙你。〞,如果Calvin早d發現,故事會點呢?如果有alternative ending就好喇 :p<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15654524319257717401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-83641606039896736702010-09-12T00:15:31.405+08:002010-09-12T00:15:31.405+08:00kateyip
多謝妳又抽空睇小弟之舊作
我啲朋友留言好鬼盞架!
"有啲嘢唔做會後悔...kateyip<br /><br />多謝妳又抽空睇小弟之舊作<br /><br />我啲朋友留言好鬼盞架!<br /><br />"有啲嘢唔做會後悔一時,<br />但係有啲嘢若果做咗,<br />就可能會後悔一世!"<br />點都係任我講啫...卡臣https://www.blogger.com/profile/07721247414470395559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-46658857150557922522010-09-11T23:21:37.505+08:002010-09-11T23:21:37.505+08:00好好睇呀 ~~~ 你的朋友既留言都好精闢,
"有啲嘢做咗會後悔一時,但係有啲嘢若果唔做...好好睇呀 ~~~ 你的朋友既留言都好精闢, <br /><br />"有啲嘢做咗會後悔一時,但係有啲嘢若果唔做,就可能會後悔一世!"<br /><br />究竟鼓唔鼓起勇氣去表白好呀 ??? 唉 !!kateyiphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09096250865864202652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-86580755386696564862010-06-17T13:26:22.036+08:002010-06-17T13:26:22.036+08:00唉..唉..tranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-72141182491902986272010-02-20T01:00:03.917+08:002010-02-20T01:00:03.917+08:00男人老狗
再一次多謝你抽空睇小弟的故事
不知你會否同意前作好睇啲?
下一步
我提意你睇
2008...男人老狗<br /><br />再一次多謝你抽空睇小弟的故事<br />不知你會否同意前作好睇啲?<br /><br />下一步<br />我提意你睇<br />2008年12月<br />2009年1月<br />有些好故事<br /><br />之後,不妨看「阿強回憶錄」<br />看完給意見吖卡臣https://www.blogger.com/profile/07721247414470395559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-92058296263875123472010-02-19T23:41:59.564+08:002010-02-19T23:41:59.564+08:00呢個故仔我都好鐘意,描繪兩個主角在愛意與親情間的掙扎與矛盾十分細膩。雖然最後Kathy和Calvin...呢個故仔我都好鐘意,描繪兩個主角在愛意與親情間的掙扎與矛盾十分細膩。雖然最後Kathy和Calvin沒有開花結果,至少彼此都表達了心跡,那段“唇語訴心聲”真的很浪漫和感人(眼濕濕ing!)<br /><br />原來…我並不是一個愛得轟烈的人,我想我只會愛在心裡,可能是後悔一世嗰種(無鬼用!)男人老狗https://www.blogger.com/profile/05478975648762103509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-50277322616907529382008-08-08T22:01:00.000+08:002008-08-08T22:01:00.000+08:00C+多謝妳抽空睇我邊有才智只不過愛發白日夢~~C+<BR/>多謝妳抽空睇<BR/>我邊有才智<BR/>只不過愛發白日夢~~卡臣https://www.blogger.com/profile/07721247414470395559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-16329116348131504352008-08-08T09:56:00.000+08:002008-08-08T09:56:00.000+08:00好精彩! 好喜歡你對兩性間帶著幻想去猜想對方心意的描寫.一口氣用左三小時讀你的Blog, 非常佩服你...好精彩! 好喜歡你對兩性間帶著幻想去猜想對方心意的描寫.<BR/><BR/>一口氣用左三小時讀你的Blog, 非常佩服你 o既才智.<BR/><BR/>奸巴爹!!C+https://www.blogger.com/profile/18245585942629122265noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-29859296782710891072008-06-30T23:47:00.000+08:002008-06-30T23:47:00.000+08:00lo哥多謝你的一口氣!我當然知你留言啦!(blog admin經email通知我有新留言嘛)勇氣.....lo哥<BR/>多謝你的一口氣!<BR/>我當然知你留言啦!(blog admin經email通知我有新留言嘛)<BR/>勇氣....好似其他朋友咁講<BR/>爭取係好. 但爭取返嚟係咪適合自己呢<BR/><BR/>多謝收看卡臣https://www.blogger.com/profile/07721247414470395559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-54119484410332436682008-06-30T22:25:00.000+08:002008-06-30T22:25:00.000+08:00卡臣,唔知你會唔會見到呢道留言呢?---一口氣睇完...有時真係唔做就後悔,真係會後悔的... 但係...卡臣,唔知你會唔會見到呢道留言呢?<BR/>---<BR/><BR/>一口氣睇完...<BR/><BR/>有時真係唔做就後悔,真係會後悔的... 但係人越大,越係要考慮好多野,推論至人生,太多考慮令人改變不了一個死胡同... Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-77266369677756562162007-12-01T23:40:00.000+08:002007-12-01T23:40:00.000+08:00bc多謝你抽空觀看我的黜作.你的分析我非常同意.Calvin應該兩人都得不到!私底下..我都想C&K...bc<BR/>多謝你抽空觀看我的黜作.<BR/>你的分析我非常同意.<BR/>Calvin應該兩人都得不到!<BR/><BR/>私底下..我都想C&K最後走在一起.<BR/>能否開花結果?<BR/>還看後傳..卡臣https://www.blogger.com/profile/07721247414470395559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-74701158580048060142007-12-01T23:34:00.000+08:002007-12-01T23:34:00.000+08:00vincent!你謙啫!我點敢認係橋王!你地咁醒我諗下集每一個情節都好易被你地估中!vincent!<BR/>你謙啫!<BR/>我點敢認係橋王!<BR/>你地咁醒<BR/>我諗下集每一個情節<BR/>都好易被你地估中!卡臣https://www.blogger.com/profile/07721247414470395559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-68765993098756660022007-12-01T23:30:00.000+08:002007-12-01T23:30:00.000+08:00Woody,多謝支持,竟然係咁,一於構思吓後傳先,到時記住捧場喎!(不過無咁快)Woody,<BR/>多謝支持,<BR/>竟然係咁,<BR/>一於構思吓後傳先,<BR/>到時記住捧場喎!<BR/>(不過無咁快)卡臣https://www.blogger.com/profile/07721247414470395559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-49948122597234874272007-12-01T11:58:00.000+08:002007-12-01T11:58:00.000+08:00非常欣賞"Take care Devan""あ-い-し-て!"的橋段,借用虛構身份向對方表達未能於現...非常欣賞"Take care Devan""あ-い-し-て!"的橋段,借用虛構身份向對方表達未能於現實宣諸於口的心實在寫得非常悽美!<BR/><BR/>得不到才是最美麗的。我覺得Calvin和Kathy若真的再發展下去,就會跌入愛情、親情、家庭問題糾纏的深淵。相信Calvin並不是那種能為愛目空一切,勇往直前的人,故事再發展下去,Calvin對其他人和事的顧慮就會成為他的絆腳石,最後悲劇收場。<BR/><BR/>主觀願望有後傳的話,你能運轉乾坤,巧妙地黜合他倆。Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-3905400196352435902007-12-01T02:24:00.000+08:002007-12-01T02:24:00.000+08:00"後傳嘛...有無idea提供?" - 你是"僑王",大把僑la:) 若你採用我的idea,又可向你..."後傳嘛...有無idea提供?" - 你是"僑王",大把僑la:) 若你採用我的idea,又可向你學習/偷師,it's great:)Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15465783257616090619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-50128616145205359272007-12-01T00:46:00.000+08:002007-12-01T00:46:00.000+08:00好!好!好!Kathy真係好勇ar..如果我擁有佢一半就好啦"兩花生"這個故事真是峰回路轉~~每一節...好!好!好!<BR/>Kathy真係好勇ar..如果我擁有佢一半就好啦<BR/>"兩花生"這個故事真是峰回路轉~~<BR/>每一節都好難估中..<BR/><BR/>p.s. 我要睇"後傳"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-86890215809089963312007-11-30T15:05:00.000+08:002007-11-30T15:05:00.000+08:00Vincent,多謝收看和意見,後傳嘛...有無idea提供?Vincent,<BR/>多謝收看和意見,<BR/>後傳嘛...有無idea提供?卡臣https://www.blogger.com/profile/07721247414470395559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-86684348865417738982007-11-30T14:46:00.000+08:002007-11-30T14:46:00.000+08:00"大家都心深領會當中意思,而不需明言" -good ending always goes with ..."大家都心深領會當中意思,而不需明言" -<BR/>good ending always goes with regrets, 甚至自欺欺人.<BR/><BR/>"敢愛敢恨感性行先<BR/>鼓起勇氣呢家嘢...終生學習的課題"<BR/><BR/>除了得到"烈男/女勇氣獎",但無實際"獎品".<BR/><BR/>"得不到才想像它美麗"<BR/>廣東俗語 - 隔離飯香:)<BR/><BR/>期待有"後傳":)Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15465783257616090619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-24600971339244775362007-11-30T12:52:00.001+08:002007-11-30T12:52:00.001+08:00VC, Thanks for reading my story!hope you will like...VC, <BR/>Thanks for reading my story!<BR/>hope you will like my following works too!卡臣https://www.blogger.com/profile/07721247414470395559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-82588408839420540662007-11-30T12:52:00.000+08:002007-11-30T12:52:00.000+08:00毅進同學,不如後傳第一集就講佢地遊大阪,betty過去捉姦.定後kathy回港東窗事發?俾啲意見好喎...毅進同學,<BR/>不如後傳第一集就講佢地遊大阪,<BR/>betty過去捉姦.<BR/>定後kathy回港東窗事發?<BR/>俾啲意見好喎!卡臣https://www.blogger.com/profile/07721247414470395559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-58580025592412687332007-11-30T12:31:00.000+08:002007-11-30T12:31:00.000+08:00nicely done.nicely done.VChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835426018233860968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1796666450031428950.post-37383327582244841352007-11-30T11:37:00.000+08:002007-11-30T11:37:00.000+08:00如果我係kalvin,先回港與kathy保持聯絡待下次去日本一定明刀明槍,因大家都有共識,比我一定會...如果我係kalvin,先回港與kathy保持聯絡待下次去日本一定明刀明槍,因大家都有共識,比我一定會做,(已經開了綠燈)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com